Okay, the topic is, this time, for a zing, I decided to write a brainstorm.
George is a 10 year old boy who has gone to have a picnic with his mom, dad, dog Harry and little sister Emily. They had their juice and sandwiches and apples. Now they are throwing the cans, plastic, foil and apple cores away in the field although their is a dustbin nearby. Harry pooed in the hollow of a tree. Emily picked flowers from the bushes.George stepped on the little bugs and creatures. Mum and Dad saw what was happening but didn't say anything. Dad suddenly stoned a deer that came by. Mum encouraged him and shouted, "Way to go! Look, there's another one! Stone her!"
Do YOU think what they did is right? Do YOU think you can change it for the better? YOU have to rewrite this paragraph in a nicer, environment friendly way.
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George is a 10 year old boy who has gone to have a picnic with his Mom, Dad, dog Harry and little sister Emily. They had their food and they put the in the dustbin. Every Harry helped by eating up the crumbs around the place. Harry did NOT poo. Emily watered the plants from the water in her flask. When George almost stepped on an ant, Mom cried, "DON'T!" and George didn't. A deer came and Dad petted it and gave it a leftover cookie. The family was very happy.
So hard! There's not much to write...
Yeah I agree with Alecia!
Lisa is a 12 year old girl who is going to have a picnic with his family.He did not bring along her dog because she knew he would poo. They did not throw rubbish along the place. They fed the animals that came to them.
Hard! too hard! Too hard..........
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